Shinzom the Battle-torn Clouded Soldier

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Username: FireZega
Name:Shinzom
Gender:Male
Age: (in moons/months please) 21
Rank: Soldier
Guild: (put none if the hyffon is a loner or a rogue) Clouded
Description: Amber fur and feathers with with many facials scars on his face. He only has one good eye which is his right eye the left one is gone. He also has about 3 scars on his face one where his missing eye is, another on his beak and the last one on his forehead.
Personality: A bit harsh when it comes to his past. He rarely shows himself around since he feels ugly but he does come out to fight. He not very talkative but he is very lonely.
Crush: None
Mate: None
Hatchkits: None
History: He used to live in a guild that was at war with another guild he fought in the bloodiest battle of that fight and both guilds were decimated. Only he survived. He rarely speaks of how he survived but he tell this the one who scared me like this was my last kill. Guildless and without purpose he searched for a guild that he thought worthy. He then arrived in Clouded and pledge allegiance to there cause.

I don't really think that they can have eye patches because they're wild. if you can fix that it'd be nice. :]

Ok then he won't have one but it going to make look scarier though. Oh can you try and draw him for an avatar?

okay accepted! and I'll make the avatars for sale on the shop that will open pretty soon. (: