Character Forum- Shade

Posts : 40 Join date : 2013-02-18

Name: Shade
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Rank: Rogue
Guild: N/A
Description: A tall, dark hyffon with the claws and the beak of color white. His feathers and fur are dark as a shadow and his tail lies some light black tips that merges into the body of color. His eyes are a faded red color with the shade of orange-ish.
Personality: Cruel, willing to go after anyone with no mercy. Hardly even think about himself. (But that can change later on in the plotline. Or maybe not, who know?)
Crush: N/A
Mate: N/A
Hatchkits: N/A
History: He got kicked out of Stone Guild for being cruel enough to kill the members of the guild. He been doing it for few days until one of his prey got escaped and reported to the leader. Leader was considered about killing Shade but Shade took his leave a second after the prey escaped, flew overhead to far land where none of his guild members ever gotten to. There he choose to leave the guild, not even daring to go back since they have found out what his action was and therefore, he keep on killing any Hyffon that catch his sight, no matter whats.

Subject: Re: Character Forum- Shade Mon Feb 18, 2013 1:40 am

Hey there, Shadow Umbreon. Good character but remember, the characters have to be realistically colored. I'm fine with him being all black, but red eyes doesn't seem real. And make sure to include in the history which guild he was previously from. Other than that wonderful cat

Just gotta wait for TreeBone25's final decision.

Posts : 40 Join date : 2013-02-18

Silvia88 wrote:: Hey there, Shadow Umbreon. Good character but remember, the characters have to be realistically colored. I'm fine with him being all black, but red eyes doesn't seem real. And make sure to include in the history which guild he was previously from. Other than that wonderful Just gotta wait for TreeBone25's final decision.

I just can't think of which guild he came from though. ^^'' and as for red eye, I just want to give it evil-like features, know what I mean? XD

Subject: Re: Character Forum- Shade Mon Feb 18, 2013 3:51 pm

Okay, fine. You may keep him with the red eyes, but don't describe them as "red as blood" because that might be a bit too red. Try something like, "His eyes are a faded red color." Or something like that. And if you can't figure out what guild he came from, you either have to change him to a loner or just do a little randomizer with the three guilds.

cat

Thank you~

Posts : 40 Join date : 2013-02-18

Silvia88 wrote:: Okay, fine. You may keep him with the red eyes, but don't describe them as "red as blood" because that might be a bit too red. Try something like, "His eyes are a faded red color." Or something like that. And if you can't figure out what guild he came from, you either have to change him to a loner or just do a little randomizer with the three guilds.

Thank you~

Why not make something like he came from the guild that are far from the three guilds' area?

and alright I'll change the describe of color eye.

Subject: Re: Character Forum- Shade Mon Feb 18, 2013 8:28 pm

Still wouldn't bode too well. Just say he's a rouge from Stone Guild. They have no rouges yet XD cat

Posts : 40 Join date : 2013-02-18

Silvia88 wrote:: Still wouldn't bode too well. Just say he's a rouge from Stone Guild. They have no rouges yet XD

Good enough.

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